im looking for feedback on some of my wwritings on my web site... anyone willing to take the tme to read?
www.magicksoft.com
thanks a lot....
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im looking for feedback on some of my wwritings on my web site... anyone willing to take the tme to read?
www.magicksoft.com
thanks a lot....
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I like it keep it up.
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Originally posted by Conf1rm3d_K1ll
This post is very similar to SPAM.
i know its like spam.. but im looking for feedback, noone really tells me anything about my stuff, and im looking for ANY feedback at all... im kinda at a loss for people to look at it
I did have quick read but unlike our very learned friend, Noble Hamlet, the beauty of poetry is something that I can't grasp. Perhaps I am missing out on something wonderful but it just doesn't work for me. Although, I did enjoy parts of Jim Morrison's "American Prayer"...
One little suggestion, change the color. Red on black is very hard on the eyes...
It completely missed me.