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    Poem Of Love By NetSyN

    Everyone thinks im a heartless bastard : ) but im not!!!


    i wrote 1 poem and shared it on AO once and a lot liked it and i just recently wrote a poem to my best friend to tell her how i truley felt about her and thought id share it with you all


    Hil,
    At first all i wanted was a hook up
    Then all i wanted was for u to break up
    I was scared to tell you how i truely felt
    cause all you wanted was a friend for help
    Every moment i spent with you
    made me relize how much i love you
    Every time i look into your eyes
    the last thing i wanted to hear was goodbye
    If i was able to write all my feelings down for you to read
    I dont see how you could say no to me
    Think that i am just a friend all you want
    but it will never be what i truley want
    Dont be scared of me for writing this
    Its all i could do to make myself feel better then to have ur kiss
    At prom i thought we could just be friends
    But all that raced threw my mind was when she might be mine
    Your friendship is everything in the world to me but love
    Love isnt our friendship its our bond
    You can shoot me down all you have too
    But one thing you cant shoot is how i feel for you
    One look in your eyes anytime in the day
    Makes me so bright and filled that i can say... I love you




    Please leave input... And please... tell ur loves how u feel about them before its to late
    [shadow]i have a herd of 1337 sheep[/shadow]
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    Nice work... tell them how you feel people.
    The more I deal with people, the more I LOVE my computer.

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    i guess im sorta a hypocrite... i never sent that poem to hil... 2 scared 2 be crushed by her telling me she just wants to be friends....

    but dont be stupid like me!
    [shadow]i have a herd of 1337 sheep[/shadow]
    Worth should be judged on quality... Not apperance... Anyone can sell you **** inside a pretty box.. The only real gift then is the box..

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    Very nice, I'm going to send this to my girl, thanx man.

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    *sniff* That was beautiful. You have quite a talent there. Go on, send it to her. At least let her see your softer side I really wish I could write stuff like that... but whenever I try to talk to someone I love I never make any sense. I'm quite impressed.

    *sob* Well, I'm gonna go before I get too emotional. Well done.
    --PhirePhreak
    I know you\'re out there. I can feel you now. I know that you\'re afraid. You\'re afraid of us. You\'re afraid of change. I don\'t know the future. I didn\'t come here to tell you how this is going to end. I came here to tell you how it\'s going to begin. I\'m going to hang up this phone, and then I\'m going to show these people what you don\'t want them to see. I\'m going to show them a world without you, a world without rules and controls, without borders or boundaries. A world where anything is possible. Where we go from there is a choice I leave to you.

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    Jaguar > Don't forget to change the name :/

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    I don't understand all this poem but I agree with you, it's too easy to simply become a good friend and to lose her.

    I'm stupid like you, I made the same error
    Life is boring. Play NetHack... --more--

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    NetSYn, that's really sweet! You should try talking to her, just because you didn't wanna try this time doesn't mean that's it! I'm glad to see that chivalry hasn't died out and that poems are still seen as a reasonable media for the expression of lurve...

    XXX
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    aaawwwwwww i feel like i accually did sumthing right for once haha : )

    thanx all for the postive input.... ill keep writeing them as i feel them
    [shadow]i have a herd of 1337 sheep[/shadow]
    Worth should be judged on quality... Not apperance... Anyone can sell you **** inside a pretty box.. The only real gift then is the box..

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    NetSyn, nice i might start posting one of the vvery few i have written....and jaguar like negative said remember to change the name
    \"\"A weak mind is like a microscope, which magnifies trifling things but cannot receive great ones.\" G.K. Chesterton, 19th-century English essayist and poet\"

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