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    Post poem: Places...

    Walking down the beach
    a cold wind blows so calmly
    my mind filled with white noise from the days events
    but calming is the water making
    making me think of far away places...
    and then like the wind I calm
    and think...
    Where to now?
    what is love but contempt for hate?

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    I like it, great work.

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    thanks, glad to hear you liked it
    what is love but contempt for hate?

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    I cant really complain about another persons artistic ability because I have none, criticism is weak.

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