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    Poem: Alive

    I wrote this just now, I'v just come home from what is probably the most scary thing I'v ever done, I went to Spiderman, and then I jumped of a Crane aprox. 75m above the water at the Beach (Their both really scary )
    Any how.....
    I stand bare-foot on a cold Unstabile Steel Cage, spinning slightly with the wind.
    I say a silent Plee to god.
    With all my strength I force my hand's to let go, By body is screaming for me to hold on.
    I look up, and lean forward's, and as the water move's into view, I feel suspended in space, nothing is moving.
    But the the wind pick's up, and a bone-chilling wave move's up my body as the Sea hurtel's toward's me.
    Panic Strike's, what have I done. All I can think of is her, standing down there waiting for me.
    I come to halt and then get shot back up again.
    As I begin to slow, and become stabile. My senses catch fire.

    The air...Never Cleaner.
    The Colour's...Never Brighter.
    The Sea, Never Blue'r
    She, Never More Beautiful.

    I feel Weak and alive at the same time.
    I am suspended in time, everything just passes with out a trace.

    I am alive.
    Well, I know it doesn't rime, but not all poem's need to rime

    I recomend to every one who's in shape to survive a bungy jump, to do it.....
    You won't regret it........Afterward's

    - Noia

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    With all the subtlety of an artillery barrage / Follow blindly, for the true path is sketchy at best. .:Bring OS X to x86!:.
    Og ingen kan minnast dei linne drag i dronningas andlet den fagre dag Då landet her kvilte i heilag fred og alle hadde kjærleik å elske med.

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    I also made a bungee jump once, but the only thing that came to my mind was: "I'm nuts...Waaaah...mmff....ggg....."
    But I'm a dutchman and dutchman aren't scared of anything.
    Nice poem to...
    Double Dutch

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    thats a really cool poem.. i think it fits that situation well
    good work

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    that is a great poem!
    it takes me back to when i went skydiving, and i'm guessing that the feeling is somewhat similar to what you must have felt. when i had finish falling, and was safely on the ground, i felt as though i could do anything, i felt all of my senses at once and everything was magnified. i promised myself that i would never take anything for granted again. you certainly are reminded of how wonderful it is to be alive when you experience something like that

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    If you ever have the chance, go for it, you won't regret it.

    - Noia
    With all the subtlety of an artillery barrage / Follow blindly, for the true path is sketchy at best. .:Bring OS X to x86!:.
    Og ingen kan minnast dei linne drag i dronningas andlet den fagre dag Då landet her kvilte i heilag fred og alle hadde kjærleik å elske med.

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