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    How Could It Be?

    How could it be?
    when times aren't right,
    that i shouldn't know,
    why this wasn't life.

    The problems
    big problems.
    Why were they there?
    How could it happen?
    Creating dispair.

    Shouldn't it be known,
    that this is wrong, this is right.
    when accidents happen,
    the system fights.

    Find me tomorrow,
    after the show.
    The show of hard feelings,
    The show of morose.

    How could it be?
    And why was it there?
    At a place so stricken,
    With trouble in the air.

    If you ask me,
    I wouldn't know.
    It all fell down,
    Like an ill-fated glow.

    These problems,
    big problems.
    Happened so fast.
    Towards people,
    my people,
    of present and past.

    How could it be?
    That i was to blame.
    Nor malice, nor greed,
    but still brought great shame.

    Don't look much further,
    for you will find out.
    Why it occured,
    and where about.

    I am sorry,
    please don't decree,
    that i am a criminal,
    a person not free.

    How Could it be? By er0k.

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    Old Fart
    Join Date
    Jun 2002
    Nice piece, my friend......didn't know that you had such a creative side, but it's a pleasant surprise!
    It isn't paranoia when you KNOW they're out to get you...

  3. #3
    thanks, i guess thats what happens when someone becomes hardcore stressed/depressed. it brings out the good possibly. for some reason i was inspired. thanks for the feedback Al.

  4. #4
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Very nice man...
    \"Nuts!\"- Commanding General 101st Airborne Division Dec 1944 in answer to German request that he surrender Bastogne during the Battle of the Bulge
    Life has a certian flavor for those who have fought and risked it all that the sheltered and protected can never experience.- John Stewart Mill
    White, Hetrosexual, Christian male. I own guns, hunt, eat meat, burn wood, and my wife wears fur... Any questions?

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    Join Date
    Oct 2002
    Not bad @ all man, pretty dang creative

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    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Dec 2001
    Very good !
    reflect the current mood no ?
    assembly.... digital dna ?

  7. #7
    Join Date
    Oct 2002
    [glowpurple]Awesome.....for lack of a better word.....that's all I can say. Try to get published. You'd make it for sure.[/glowpurple]

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    o it reflects the m ood trust me, my life is on the brink of finished. not life/death, just my status/education/quality of life.

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