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    Poetry

    "Torture"

    These feelings inside . . . when I see your face
    Are enough to drive a man insane
    and I don't know why. . . I canít seem to find
    A single word to say to you in time

    You walk over me. . . Like im some disease
    And you know how much you hurt me down inside
    But you don't really see. . . the tears that you bring
    As you push the dagger deep inside my mind

    These games that you play. . . have caused me to see
    The true person that you are today
    But I don't know why. . . these feelings won't subside
    I still feel the same as I did the first day
    "Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill

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    http://www.antionline.com/showthread...&pagenumber=11

    Its part of a poem I wrote a few days ago. I just blurted it out at random. There is more and it actually gets alot better but I just gotta remember it, thats all. The poem is called "drink my ****ing sperm."

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    sometimes I think that
    people get too deep about
    poetry, y'know?
    Never because of, Always in spite of.

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    I actually wrote that when I was at work the other day. It sucks. . . . but. . . oh well.

    Originally posted here by |The|Specialist
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    Its part of a poem I wrote a few days ago. I just blurted it out at random. There is more and it actually gets alot better but I just gotta remember it, thats all. The poem is called "drink my ****ing sperm."
    lmao. . . Thats pretty messed up man. But hey. . . . poetry tells a lot about a person.
    "Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill

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    If the two poles of the earth could be brought together with an indiscribable harmony
    there would be a question as to wheather destiny had a habbit of creating strong currents
    and unsailorable seas, madness is even as night and day one only knows what's right as
    seen within from a spectrum of thought be it faded or judged.

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    Mines called "Happy Happy Joy Joy, Jesus loves you"

    Ra! screams he, the one armed man
    who looks and
    waits
    patiently.

    Your mother sucks cocks in hell yet
    like a summers kiss,
    a shameless ballet of sunshine
    lets Jesus **** you.

    Midnight, the zenith of my being
    how art we to know
    our destiny?
    of clockworks and industry
    of time and space
    of cause and effect
    we question; are we the true owners
    of UNIX based operating systems?

    Yes, Jesus loves you
    happy happy joy joy
    says a silent sculpture, whos lips
    are of stone.
    immobile, like the wind
    yet - a stunning paradox
    gentle as the zebra

    well, believe it or not, that wasnt actually a poem. I just wrote the first word/phrase that came into my head and pressed 'enter' at odd moments. I bet if i was to put it to my english teacher they would manage to deconstruct it and write a 60,000 word thesis on the deep cultural significance of it and how it relates to society in the context of globalisation.

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    sometimes I think that
    people get too deep about
    poetry, y'know?
    It's not they are deep in to it alot of people can only express how they feel through words

    in which i think is a good thing
    I had to google 'jfgi' to see what it meant. The irony is overwhelming.

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    Originally posted here by cdkj
    It's not they are deep in to it alot of people can only express how they feel through words
    in which i think is a good thing
    Exactly. I am totally different IRL. Im very withdrawn. Shy. No one can ever tell if something is wrong with me because I try to show no emotion. I hold everything back inside. Which is bad in a way. But online. . . I don't really don't care. I can express myself freely.
    "Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill

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    Guys, I think you missed it Chumprocks post was haiku. 5 syllables, 7, then 5 more
    Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.

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    Didn't miss it. Why else would he post it in 3 line format. Instead of 1 line.
    "Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill

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