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    /me wrote a poem :O...whatever

    Wow I never do these kind of things but 2 days ago this came into my mind, it was directed to my girlfriend, don't know how it'll sound if English is your native language...

    When angels die
    When heaven fall
    I will keep on loving my
    darling which they call
    the most beautiful creature earth ever made
    It was good, now it's great
    Us

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    Very good!

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    Thx, another one but which isn't very original as I stole the word "hatebreeders" from the misfits and the sentence "Honey, can I be your savior tonight" is based upon the sentence "Mommy, can I go out and kill tonight" but heck here it is:

    People rise from the death
    Hatebreeders everywhere

    Honey, can I be your savior tonight?
    When you weren't there I was outside,
    wandering in the darkness,
    looking for my love
    The above sentences are produced by the propaganda and indoctrination of people manipulating my mind since 1987, hence, I cannot be held responsible for this post\'s content - me

    www.elhalf.com

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    Creativity is key, like me, I can't draw worth a crap, but I try to be as creative as possible.

    It's the effort that counts.

    There is no right or wrong in a poem... everyone's efforts are good. That’s what this troll thinks.

    /Troll

    Keep being creative.


    See, I'm only a nasty troll when provoked.

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