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December 5th, 2003, 01:31 PM
#1
/me wrote a poem :O...whatever
Wow I never do these kind of things but 2 days ago this came into my mind, it was directed to my girlfriend, don't know how it'll sound if English is your native language...
When angels die
When heaven fall
I will keep on loving my
darling which they call
the most beautiful creature earth ever made
It was good, now it's great
Us
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December 5th, 2003, 03:30 PM
#2
Very good!
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December 5th, 2003, 04:00 PM
#3
Thx, another one but which isn't very original as I stole the word "hatebreeders" from the misfits and the sentence "Honey, can I be your savior tonight" is based upon the sentence "Mommy, can I go out and kill tonight" but heck here it is:
People rise from the death
Hatebreeders everywhere
Honey, can I be your savior tonight?
When you weren't there I was outside,
wandering in the darkness,
looking for my love
The above sentences are produced by the propaganda and indoctrination of people manipulating my mind since 1987, hence, I cannot be held responsible for this post\'s content - me
www.elhalf.com
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December 5th, 2003, 04:04 PM
#4
Creativity is key, like me, I can't draw worth a crap, but I try to be as creative as possible.
It's the effort that counts.
There is no right or wrong in a poem... everyone's efforts are good. That’s what this troll thinks.
/Troll
Keep being creative.
See, I'm only a nasty troll when provoked.
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