PM me....

Be prepared to send me a copy of your script after I sign a disclaimer accepting that the entire original work is yours.... I'll _advise_ you how to fix it to give "realism" without making it boring, (unless it's boring in the first place... ... But remember, if it can't be fixed in such a way as to make it real, there wouldn't be much I could do... nor anyone else....

The whole problem is the storyline and how you can incorporate the "hacking" issue without boring the hell out of the audience and losing them on a technical basis at the same time.... It needs to be done on an understandable/explainable basis. It would need some "edge" to the story in a way that the technical aspects are undestandable to the regular person in order to create the "edge". It can be done with appropriate dialogue but that's not easy to create and be _realistic_ in the end.

Black: He said the Silicon Valley of the EAST! Virginia is in the east, remember? Jeez, I have to teach you Yanks everything including your own country's geography?