Poem Of Love By NetSyN

Everyone thinks im a heartless bastard : ) but im not!!!


i wrote 1 poem and shared it on AO once and a lot liked it and i just recently wrote a poem to my best friend to tell her how i truley felt about her and thought id share it with you all


Hil,
At first all i wanted was a hook up
Then all i wanted was for u to break up
I was scared to tell you how i truely felt
cause all you wanted was a friend for help
Every moment i spent with you
made me relize how much i love you
Every time i look into your eyes
the last thing i wanted to hear was goodbye
If i was able to write all my feelings down for you to read
I dont see how you could say no to me
Think that i am just a friend all you want
but it will never be what i truley want
Dont be scared of me for writing this
Its all i could do to make myself feel better then to have ur kiss
At prom i thought we could just be friends
But all that raced threw my mind was when she might be mine
Your friendship is everything in the world to me but love
Love isnt our friendship its our bond
You can shoot me down all you have too
But one thing you cant shoot is how i feel for you
One look in your eyes anytime in the day
Makes me so bright and filled that i can say... I love you



Please leave input... And please... tell ur loves how u feel about them before its to late

Nice work... tell them how you feel people. :)

i guess im sorta a hypocrite... i never sent that poem to hil... 2 scared 2 be crushed by her telling me she just wants to be friends....

but dont be stupid like me!

Very nice, I'm going to send this to my girl, thanx man. :)

*sniff* That was beautiful. You have quite a talent there. Go on, send it to her. At least let her see your softer side :) I really wish I could write stuff like that... but whenever I try to talk to someone I love I never make any sense. I'm quite impressed.

*sob* Well, I'm gonna go before I get too emotional. Well done.
--PhirePhreak

Jaguar > Don't forget to change the name :/

I don't understand all this poem but I agree with you, it's too easy to simply become a good friend and to lose her.

I'm stupid like you, I made the same error :(

NetSYn, that's really sweet! You should try talking to her, just because you didn't wanna try this time doesn't mean that's it! I'm glad to see that chivalry hasn't died out and that poems are still seen as a reasonable media for the expression of lurve...:hearts:

XXX

aaawwwwwww i feel like i accually did sumthing right for once haha : )

thanx all for the postive input.... ill keep writeing them as i feel them

NetSyn, nice i might start posting one of the vvery few i have written....and jaguar like negative said remember to change the name :)