Poem: Alive

I wrote this just now, I'v just come home from what is probably the most scary thing I'v ever done, I went to Spiderman, and then I jumped of a Crane aprox. 75m above the water at the Beach (Their both really scary :p )
Any how.....

Quote:

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I stand bare-foot on a cold Unstabile Steel Cage, spinning slightly with the wind.
I say a silent Plee to god.
With all my strength I force my hand's to let go, By body is screaming for me to hold on.
I look up, and lean forward's, and as the water move's into view, I feel suspended in space, nothing is moving.
But the the wind pick's up, and a bone-chilling wave move's up my body as the Sea hurtel's toward's me.
Panic Strike's, what have I done. All I can think of is her, standing down there waiting for me.
I come to halt and then get shot back up again.
As I begin to slow, and become stabile. My senses catch fire.

The air...Never Cleaner.
The Colour's...Never Brighter.
The Sea, Never Blue'r
She, Never More Beautiful.

I feel Weak and alive at the same time.
I am suspended in time, everything just passes with out a trace.

I am alive.

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Well, I know it doesn't rime, but not all poem's need to rime ;)

I recomend to every one who's in shape to survive a bungy jump, to do it.....
You won't regret it........Afterward's :D

- Noia

EDIT: Just though you ppl migh wanna see the place...
Bungy Jump Holland (English)
Click on the second icon down on the left hand side... it say's:
Bungy Jump Center Scheveningen

I also made a bungee jump once, but the only thing that came to my mind was: "I'm nuts...Waaaah...mmff....ggg....."
But I'm a dutchman and dutchman aren't scared of anything. :)
Nice poem to... :D

thats a really cool poem.. i think it fits that situation well
good work

that is a great poem! :D
it takes me back to when i went skydiving, and i'm guessing that the feeling is somewhat similar to what you must have felt. when i had finish falling, and was safely on the ground, i felt as though i could do anything, i felt all of my senses at once and everything was magnified. i promised myself that i would never take anything for granted again. you certainly are reminded of how wonderful it is to be alive when you experience something like that :)

Tanx :)
If you ever have the chance, go for it, you won't regret it.

- Noia