somthin' 'bout the universe & how it's all conected

several weeks have passed now
since she left me
still she shows her face to ask me how i am

she says.....








and i'm so happy




saw a friend of mine, said
i was worried 'bout you
i'd heard...




everybody's goto (got to) leave to darkness sometimes,,,,
?

shitness man.. iknow how you feel.... same **** with me recentally..
goto mywebsite and see some **** ive written

www.magicksoft.com

hope it gets better for you

if you were a presbyterian you would be glad.

yearn yearn, it's all too real.

oh man your 'writings' certainly did brighten up my day. nothing beats a desperate display of teenage angst.

"The burrowing hate for the mind is sleeping
The power to create is off its Rail
The madcap sleeps in a pillar of madness
The Quietness of the madness claims his sleep"

haha these waters are SHALLOW.

"See how out right each onnoculative non-recourse"

i commend your made up words and made up grammar

its misplelled and such... jesus.... like how you like to bash other peoples creativity... perhaps you dont ahve any of your own?

I'm going to have to change threads or update my mood.
We know what your talking about litmus... hang in there.

writiings dont ahve to follow grammer, its creative, not formal, if you want something formal ill send a letter written to my boss or something. (im not being literal there)

your writings are all cliché and impossible to understand do to your complete inability to phrase english sentences.

thats the point though

Madcap, look up the definition of that word

SM...as someone who's variously made a living as a visual artist and a musician, i just have to say get used to it...there's always people like oblio...who criticize...even make personal attacks because they don't like or don't understand what you're trying to say...truth is it doesn't matter...if YOU like what you do...or if it does something for you...then suck it up...tell the critics to f-off and go write some more...or paint or whatever...

"teenage angst" and angst in general has produced much of what we call music and art ...i know my most creative times are also the times when i'm most miserable... :)

and besides...even if your stuff does suck (not saying it does)...the ONLY way to get better is to do what you do...over and over...i guarantee you'll be mightly embarassed by your early stuff...but that will be because you got better...

my advice...leave the troll alone and don't get involved in a flame war...especially over something as subjective as creativity...unless getting invovled in one makes ya more creative...hehe

it seems more ostentatious than anything else. I am all for non traditional art and I happen to be a post modernist, however your writings seem far to typical and the lack of structure and ability seems to me to come from a lack of ability as opposed to a love of kitsch.

Zigar-

thanks :)

So, cowboy(oblio). Pony up some of your own work before you criticize others. It's like a friend of mine who gives me crap constantly about the NFL team I like and yet he doesn't claim any team. Oblio, you seem to derive pleasure from cutting other people down. All that shows is how little you think of yourself.

Leave me alone
Just let me die
Please cease this pain
Which makes me cry
Take me to a silence deep
A place un-feeling
Where I can't weep
For here on Earth
I've lost my way
I'm not the person
Whom I portray
I'm tired
I'm scared
I'm sick of pretending
Please take my life
Create my ending.

"goodness of writingness"

Litmus---


Spoke to my lawyer....
Mr. Good News,
He got me joint custody,
legal separation.....

I'm so happy that I can't stop crying.....


If you're actually going through all that....man, I'm sorry, been there done that, and it sucks. :(

well cripes and uh oh, thsoe are some mighty fine written words you have, however the message concerns me so.
which is why i say take a look around
to realize how lucky we all are. Those people in this forum can obviously read or write, well not necessarily write do too speech to text programs.... BUT in any case a large majority of the world is illiterate, in an article i read i believe it said like 3 or 4 billion??? thats a lot of people, so yeah the woman left you, which hurts a friggin lot, or if not a woman the significant other left, but cripes it hurts, and no one can tell you it doesnt but just remember how lucky you are, look at the cloud, the beautiful sky, life may be full of pain, but there is also such beauty, beauty that we tend to let slip on by


-mR. j0nes

hang in there :)

The pain should just make you appreciate what you have even more.

compleatly agreed with Korp there

Quote:

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Traped, I am Am..
Sorounded by This Malice, Unknow
Leaft behind, Never found
FORGOTEN
I recoul as Your enter

Your Angelic Light Eswathes my mind, Euphoria
You are like my Heroin
As you walk down the Hall, I sense you
You turn, look and smile, the wolr lights up,
Beauty all around
You keep walking, look back, please

EMPTY VOID

The world ebbs away as sand throug the hourglas of my insignifican life.
Ice cold flames Flick at my santiy, BURN DOWN MY MIND

I lay here, blood soaked, empty, cold.

Your face, glowing
You found me, I'll be alright, as long as I am with you

- Noia

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I wrote this when I was really deppresed, and most of it acctualy happened, I didn't do heroin, I was addicted to her....

We'r together now, but she lives in a diff country, bummer......

Life is tough, and I'v seen alot of sh!t, but Keep martching, if she hadn't found me, I would probably have been dead....

PM me if your confuzed.....
And the Poem isn't supposed to rime.....

- Noia
:D :D :D

Just to be sure we're all on the same page.....In the beginning Litmus was quoting a song by Sting....and my previous post was another chorus of the same song. But yes, I do share joint custody of my son with his dad.....but thanks for the good thoughts. And I have to concur with the current slant of this thread....You have to appreciate the beauty of life for what it is...Because obviously, if you have the time, the ability and the means to participate in this thread.....we're doing better than about 75% of the current world population! ;)

When I get depressed, I like to sing.
You should listen to Queen. I swear, you listen to Queen, or Led Zeppelin, you will never have another depressed day. :)