Poem Of Love By NetSyN

Everyone thinks im a heartless bastard : ) but im not!!!


i wrote 1 poem and shared it on AO once and a lot liked it and i just recently wrote a poem to my best friend to tell her how i truley felt about her and thought id share it with you all


Hil,
At first all i wanted was a hook up
Then all i wanted was for u to break up
I was scared to tell you how i truely felt
cause all you wanted was a friend for help
Every moment i spent with you
made me relize how much i love you
Every time i look into your eyes
the last thing i wanted to hear was goodbye
If i was able to write all my feelings down for you to read
I dont see how you could say no to me
Think that i am just a friend all you want
but it will never be what i truley want
Dont be scared of me for writing this
Its all i could do to make myself feel better then to have ur kiss
At prom i thought we could just be friends
But all that raced threw my mind was when she might be mine
Your friendship is everything in the world to me but love
Love isnt our friendship its our bond
You can shoot me down all you have too
But one thing you cant shoot is how i feel for you
One look in your eyes anytime in the day
Makes me so bright and filled that i can say... I love you



Please leave input... And please... tell ur loves how u feel about them before its to late

Nice work... tell them how you feel people. :)

i guess im sorta a hypocrite... i never sent that poem to hil... 2 scared 2 be crushed by her telling me she just wants to be friends....

but dont be stupid like me!

Very nice, I'm going to send this to my girl, thanx man. :)

*sniff* That was beautiful. You have quite a talent there. Go on, send it to her. At least let her see your softer side :) I really wish I could write stuff like that... but whenever I try to talk to someone I love I never make any sense. I'm quite impressed.

*sob* Well, I'm gonna go before I get too emotional. Well done.
--PhirePhreak

Jaguar > Don't forget to change the name :/

I don't understand all this poem but I agree with you, it's too easy to simply become a good friend and to lose her.

I'm stupid like you, I made the same error :(

NetSYn, that's really sweet! You should try talking to her, just because you didn't wanna try this time doesn't mean that's it! I'm glad to see that chivalry hasn't died out and that poems are still seen as a reasonable media for the expression of lurve...:hearts:

XXX

aaawwwwwww i feel like i accually did sumthing right for once haha : )

thanx all for the postive input.... ill keep writeing them as i feel them

NetSyn, nice i might start posting one of the vvery few i have written....and jaguar like negative said remember to change the name :)

nice poem, u should give it to her, worst could happen is u could get shot down and have avoid u right? or so my recent experience was but u need to try if u feel so about her

Netsyn...send it to her. You don't want to spend your life wondering "what if".

Love is over rated.

well guys i took ur advice and i was shot down....


But dont give up on ur love... mine was just... 1 sided... cya guys]

--NetSyN

unlucky :(

hey plenty more fish in the sea......

v_Ln

LOL....ya see what I mean! Now you've ruined a friendship too.


Who ever said "Better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all" is an idiot. Anyone who's ever had to pay for divorce lawyers will agree with me.....

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LOL....ya see what I mean! Now you've ruined a friendship too.


Who ever said "Better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all" is an idiot. Anyone who's ever had to pay for divorce lawyers will agree with me.....

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No!!!!

And I've paid for a divorce I just married the wrong idiot..er...guy.

Netsyn..now you know where you stand with her and you can move on. Sorry it didn't turn out but at least you know. Right? :(

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Who ever said "Better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all" is an idiot. Anyone who's ever had to pay for divorce lawyers will agree with me.....

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Been there done that...and it took a LONG time to get the nerve to try again...but it's great this time!

Deb :D

NetSyn....love is twisted and sick sometimes but the risk is really worth it....atleast now u never have to look back and think what would have been...in given time u can go out and fall in love and be happy :)...good luck

hey, NetSyn, took guts to send it to her.....Sorry didn't work out.

Never give up....The right one is out there....(Im still looking) LOL

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Everyone thinks im a heartless bastard : ) but im not!!!

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well i guess it's too bad she didn't fall for it .. umm.. i mean you..
but at least now you can go back to being a "heartless bastard " ;) :D

NetSyn--> IMHO, you did the right thing. I respect you as a brave, caring man now... I think. Anyway, my biggest advice at this point is to keep up the friendship. There is still love involved in friendship, and that's better than none. Also, friends tend to be much more honest with each other than people involved in a romantic relationship. That honesty leads to a much more meaningful relationship. I figured all this out too late, and I've regretted it since. Don't make my mistake and give up on a relationship just because it didn't go as far as you wanted it to.

--PhirePhreak

Yes very good..I wonder if a red rose..and this little poem will work?