k0rupt3d_1llusi0ns: Chapter 1.

Introduction-
BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. The door flies open and 15 swat officers swarm the house.
"whats going on?" my mother screams. "Upstairs" one of the officers yell.
The poice run up the stairs and bust down my door. I knew it was only a matter
of time. "Your under arrest. Please place your hands behind your back". As im
being hauled out of my room my mom just stairs at me in tears. I feel bad
I have put her through this. Nothing I can do about it now. Acctually we are
getting a little ahead of our selves. This is how it all started though.

Chapter 1-
3:15AM. I should probably get to sleep soon. Im busy though. Im cracking an
encryption for kyle on my Slackware 9.0 box. Im also reading some linux tutorials
online. Good only 5min left on the encryption. Man I have to be up in about 3hrs.
I can barely hold my eyes open though. Aww forget it im just going to go to bed,
I'll see how the encryption went tomorrow morning.

"Good morning Seattle" I turn off the alarm clock and get out of bed. Im running
a little late but only by about 5min. I get up and get in the shower. I get out and go to
the closet and grab my favorite Slipknot shirt and a pair of black dickies. As im putting
my cloths on I go over and throw my laptop, 3 floppy disks, A C++ programming book, and my
cd case inside my backpack. I grab my CD player and put in Slayer. I head out the door and
go for the bus.

"Hey man, hows it going?" I ask kyle. Kyle is my best friend. I've known him since
I was 5. Our parents met at work and we have been best friend ever since. Kyle is the one
who got me interested in computers. All though I know a little more than him in some areas
he is very smart. We like alot of the same things and are pretty in seperable. "So you ready
for today." He asks. "Yea im ready." I knew what he was talking about. Man I cant wait until
lunch this is going to be the best.

Its 12:15pm and I just got out of 3rd period. Im supposed to be at lunch but I have to
meet kyle at the library. I walk in and plop down at the computer right next to him. I pull out
laptop and boot up. Its got all the information we need for todays hack. Kyle is already inside
though. Let me explain what is going on here. Our health teacher Ms.Grube, well she is an EX-crack
whore. She is so mean to. Its ok though were going to get her back. You see she uses a projector
thats hooked up to her computer to show the class powerpoint presentations. By now kyle is almost
ready. "Ok lets do it I say." He closes her powerpoint presentation and opens a word document.
"Attention students" he types "it say been brought to our attention that MS.Grube, better know to
the students and "the skanky whore" has been sleeping with the principle". He then loads up about
5 porn websites. To top it off up loads a picture we moddified in Photoshop of the health teacher
giving the principle head. "OHH ****. The librarian is coming." He disconnects and pulls up a fresh
browser window. He pretends to be reading something on Antionline.com The librarian leaves and we
pack up our stuff. Man was that great.


Well thats my story. Let me know if you like it? Acctually thats only the first chapter... If you guys like it ill write more. Or maybe ill start a different story with a different approach.

cheers,
kryptonic

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He pretends to be reading something on Antionline.com

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Cracking computers and reading AO, what agreat day ;)

Good story, i'd like to read some more of this stuff.

Just one note, change the title to something less script kiddishish, when I saw the post I came in here to check whether it needed closing cos I thought it was some sk stuff.

Yea i do need to work on the title. the way i came up with it is that k0rupt3d_1llusi0ns is his handle. :-/. I havee never been to good at titles though but....ill work on it.

Thats why the Hacker Handle Generator is here to help you ;)

http://www.rootcompromise.org/hhg/index.php

Wow, great story. Pretty nice kinda like a "hackers" feel to it. You should definitely write a chapter two and maybe write it longer. If you make it really long (which you should) come out with a chapter like every 3 days or a week and that would be nice. Good job :)

Love the signature Spyder, Tupac is my favorite oldskool rap artist.

Call it The Root of the Problem or something, just pun it anyway for that eye catching appeal.

yea im going to start chapter 2 tonight. But ill be going home to washington to be with my girl so the only way i will be able to post more chapters is by the comps at school cuz we got no net access at her house. Ill be back here in about a month though and if i dont post any while im gone ill make sure to have atleast 2 chapters when i come back :) thanks for the compliments everyone. I acctually didnt think it was that good but im glad you guys like it :). thanks again

cheers
kryptonic

Nice little story you got your self there dude.
Looks like we got a budding writer on our hands.
defiantly going to keep an eye out for the next chapter.

Oh and I can change the thread title if you want aswell.

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Originally posted here by MemorY
Love the signature Spyder, Tupac is my favorite oldskool rap artist.

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:mad: Tupac is my favorite rap artist period. Whether tis be old school, conscious, gangsta, hip-hop, or underground, he's my favorite. So to you I say bah ;)

PSH wtf is this a tupac thread J/P :)

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Originally posted here by kryptonic
PSH wtf is this a tupac thread J/P

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HEY! I am very conscious of when there's a Tupac mentioning anywhere :D Would you like me to TURN it into a Tupac thread? ;) Nah, but seriously you should be worrying about Chapter Two of that series, not the greatest rapper of all time ;) /me ponders the thought of starting a Tupac thread..

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me ponders the thought of starting a Tupac thread..

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Me dares yah..

Oh yeah by the way nice story kryptonic needs some improvement here and there, but other then that good work, Would give yah some kudos, but i've maxed out for the day so i carn't

Anyhow carn't wait for chapter 2, it'd be good to see what the Teacher does in response to the free show the class got to see..


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ok i was wonderingn if i could use part of the sotry for my story formy Englsih class...my story goes as follows......

Hackers

My NameEnglish
Mrs. My Teacher


Intro:

It was the 12th February when MemorY was born. His dad worked for Microsoft and his mom worked for Google Inc, as you can image he was a lucky baby and had a lot of tech toys and couple computers laying around to play with since he was born. Of course when he grew bigger, he became a hacker. His parent weren’t home that much so they didn’t really watch what he was doing, when he asked them for money they just gave it to him, never asked what it was for. His best friend was DH ANTI FLAG a computer programmer/gamer/cracker. And he was really into cryptography. Since they met in kindergarten they became friends and both of them were really into computers.

BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. The door flew open and 15 S.W.A.T officers swarmed the house.
"What’s going on?" MemorY’s mother screams.
"Upstairs" one of the officers yelled.
The police ran up the stairs and bust down MemorY’s door. MemorY knew it was only a matter
of time.
"You are under arrest. Please place your hands behind your back". As MemorY’s
being hauled out of my room his mom just stares at him in tears.
“I feel bad I have put her through this. Nothing I can do about it now.” MemorY thought.
Actually we are getting a little ahead of our selves. This is how it all started though.
3:15AM.
“I should probably get to sleep soon. I’m busy though. I’m cracking an
encryption for DH ANTI FLAG on my Slackware 9.0 box. I’m also reading some Linux tutorials
online. Good only 5min left on the encryption. Man I have to be up in about 3hrs.
I can barely hold my eyes open though. Aww forget it I’m just going to go to bed,
I'll see how the encryption went tomorrow morning.” MemorY said to himself.

"Good morning Mentor" MemorY turns off the alarm clock and gets out of bed. He’s running
a little late but only by about 5min. He gets up and gets in the shower. He runsout of the shower, goes to the close and grabs his favorite FUBU Platinum shirt and Ecko shoes. As he’s putting on his clothes he goes over and throws his 17” laptop, 3 floppy disks, A C++ programming book, and his CD case inside the backpack. Grabs his CD player and put in Eminem. MemorY heads out the door and goes for the bus. The day began.

"Hey man, how’s it going?" MemorY asks DH ANTI FLAG. ANTI FLAG is his best friend. MemorY knows him since he was 5. DH ANTI FLAG is the one who got him interested in computers. All though MemorY knew a little more than him in some areas he is very smart. We like a lot of the same things and are pretty in separable.
"So you ready for today." ANTI FLAG asks.
"Yea I’m ready." MemorY knew what he was talking about. Man I can’t wait until lunch; this is going to be the best.

Its 12:15pm and MemorY just got out of 3rd period. He’s supposed to be at lunch but he has to meet ANTI FLAG at the library. I walk in and plop down at the computer right next to him. I pull out the laptop and boot up. It’s got all the information we need for today’s hack. ANTI FLAG is already inside though. Let me explain what is going on here. Their health teacher Mrs. Gruber, well she is a mean teacher. It’s ok though they were going to get her back. You see she uses a website that’s being uploaded from her computer, all the grades are recorded on there and she doesn’t keep back-ups. MemorY loads the IMF mainframe programs and types in the IP of her computer. Please Log In: He quickly uses a password sniffer to get her log in name and password information. They are in. DH ANTI FLAG know more about DOS so he opens up cmd.exe and type in Format C:/… “Are you sure you you want to delete all the data on your C drive” the computer displays. ANTI FLAG presses Y to confirm the deletion. 1%...35%..67%...100%... Formatting hard drive finished. MemorY quickly logs out and used a back-tracer to delete the logs in the librarian computer of their actions. An ANTIFLAG picks up his school bag with a hook hanging off of it. After that they went to MemorY’s house. Even though MemorY was 14 he had a car and a fake driver’s license. When he was almost 14 he hacked into Mentors police station and printed out a driver’s license with his picture on it, later he went up and just picked it up when nobody was in the office. So they drove to MemorY’s place to begin their biggest hack. They thought they had the knowledge to hack the FBI, get some confidential information and sell it to terrorists. DH ANTI FLAG boots up 3 machines running Sclakware 8.5, Red Hat 9 and a cracked version of Windows Longhorn. MemorY brings his spare monitors down and hooks up the rest of the older machines to them. They had a network running in their room. MemorY tries to FTP and DDoS their website, nothing happens, the ping command they sent was rejected. The FBI had some good Alienware servers, running Xeon processors at 3.2 Ghz speed. MemorY uses an old IE exploit to enter the root location on one of their servers, luckily it was the server from the Vice President of the FBI. MemorY and DH ANTI FLAG now had control over the FBI network. They used a lot of proxy’s and jump points, they though the FBI couldn’t trace them back, they were horribly wrong…..

BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. The door flew open and 15 S.W.A.T officers swarmed ………


i attached the word document since it looks messed up like this.....

HAHAHA LOL...sure if you wanna use it go right ahead....LOL I wrote it thought :-P

Oh now i just feel all creative, i'm thinking about writing something now, it wouldn't be as great as these 2 story's but hey i'll give it a shot..

Anyone got any ideas that i could use cause i don't have a clue with what i could start with.

Write a story about a hacker getting caught or maybe about a network admin having problems at work because of an unruly user or something to that nature :D Make it something funny and creative, I need a good laugh :(.

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network admin having problems at work because of an unruly user or something to that nature

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Havent you read Gore's "Bastard System Admin from Michigan" stories, i think there are 12...

Yeah, I have.. and there all funny as hell. But the more people that right, the more funny material to read. :)

Gore made it to 12? I must have spent too much time elsewhere, I'll have to look those up in my free time...

Anyways, I wrote a play inspired by BOFH and other stuff for my English class's final big writing assignment. "The Admin of Doom" - for lack of a better title. I'm in the process of editing it, etc., and after I get it graded I'll post a PDF of it. (I don't need MemorY creating derivitave works until after I get it graded :D) My own thoughts to my play are that it isn't too bad, although my ending is somewhat abrupt. Then again, since I have to print off about 5 copies of the script, it is definately good not to go beyond 24 pages...

Printout Costs = Ouch :(



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I wish I could toss out some fresh ideas to ponder on. But I can't think of anything new, exciting, and somewhat realistically plausable. Maybe a story of an imprisoned computer criminal, his wild dreams of Internet rampage, and some sort of secret code that the CIA wants to get from him. Kind of like he wasn't acturally caught, but is in jail because he knows something that "they" need? I don't know, get creative. I want to read something. :)

I got a B on that story .....

HAHA! Deserved an F ;)

I've nearly finished my story that i'm writing..
I didn't really think that it would be so hard, but it took me an Hour before i was happy with the first 2 sentences..
Anyhow kudos to everyone that has submitted a story, i give credit to you all for the effort that you've all put in..


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I've written my story/play and posted it. Check it out: The Admin of Doom


AO Post with Description (Hint: No Replies, Low Views...): http://www.antionline.com/showthread...&postid=753164

Direct Linkage to my PDF: http://home.steven.murphy.name/cliff...in_of_doom.pdf


Enjoy, and I hope to see some more stuff to read. :)


BTW, incase I never mentioned it, I did enjoy korrupted illusions chapter 1. The way the story looks back at what was done is neat - you know how it ends but want to know how it happened... Just some issues with is this a flash back to the past (to use past tense) vs. did we acturally go back in time to witness this story (present tense). Keep up the good work.

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BTW, incase I never mentioned it, I did enjoy korrupted illusions chapter 1. The way the story looks back at what was done is neat - you know how it ends but want to know how it happened... Just some issues with is this a flash back to the past (to use past tense) vs. did we acturally go back in time to witness this story (present tense). Keep up the good work.

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Thats what my teacher said, she said "Nice use of flashback/time dimensions "....

WOW nice to see that I enspired all of you to write like this...Im about to start chapter 2....Ive been busy with school work.