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    The Lizard King SarinMage's Avatar
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    feedback...

    im looking for feedback on some of my wwritings on my web site... anyone willing to take the tme to read?

    www.magicksoft.com

    thanks a lot....
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    This post is very similar to SPAM.

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    Noble Hamlet
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    I like it keep it up.

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    Originally posted by Conf1rm3d_K1ll
    This post is very similar to SPAM.





    i know its like spam.. but im looking for feedback, noone really tells me anything about my stuff, and im looking for ANY feedback at all... im kinda at a loss for people to look at it
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    I did have quick read but unlike our very learned friend, Noble Hamlet, the beauty of poetry is something that I can't grasp. Perhaps I am missing out on something wonderful but it just doesn't work for me. Although, I did enjoy parts of Jim Morrison's "American Prayer"...

    One little suggestion, change the color. Red on black is very hard on the eyes...

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    It completely missed me.
    Mankind have a great aversion to intellectual labor; but even supposing knowledge to be easily attainable, more people would be content to be ignorant than would take even a little trouble to acquire it.
    - Samuel Johnson

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