k0rupt3d_1llusi0ns: Chapter 1.

[Spyder32]

Yeah, I have.. and there all funny as hell. But the more people that right, the more funny material to read.

[Tim_axe]

Gore made it to 12? I must have spent too much time elsewhere, I'll have to look those up in my free time...

Anyways, I wrote a play inspired by BOFH and other stuff for my English class's final big writing assignment. "The Admin of Doom" - for lack of a better title. I'm in the process of editing it, etc., and after I get it graded I'll post a PDF of it. (I don't need MemorY creating derivitave works until after I get it graded ) My own thoughts to my play are that it isn't too bad, although my ending is somewhat abrupt. Then again, since I have to print off about 5 copies of the script, it is definately good not to go beyond 24 pages...

Printout Costs = Ouch



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I wish I could toss out some fresh ideas to ponder on. But I can't think of anything new, exciting, and somewhat realistically plausable. Maybe a story of an imprisoned computer criminal, his wild dreams of Internet rampage, and some sort of secret code that the CIA wants to get from him. Kind of like he wasn't acturally caught, but is in jail because he knows something that "they" need? I don't know, get creative. I want to read something.

[MemorY]

I got a B on that story .....

[Spyder32]

HAHA! Deserved an F

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I've nearly finished my story that i'm writing..
I didn't really think that it would be so hard, but it took me an Hour before i was happy with the first 2 sentences..
Anyhow kudos to everyone that has submitted a story, i give credit to you all for the effort that you've all put in..


f2b:.

[Tim_axe]

I've written my story/play and posted it. Check it out: The Admin of Doom


AO Post with Description (Hint: No Replies, Low Views...): http://www.antionline.com/showthread...&postid=753164

Direct Linkage to my PDF: http://home.steven.murphy.name/cliff...in_of_doom.pdf


Enjoy, and I hope to see some more stuff to read.


BTW, incase I never mentioned it, I did enjoy korrupted illusions chapter 1. The way the story looks back at what was done is neat - you know how it ends but want to know how it happened... Just some issues with is this a flash back to the past (to use past tense) vs. did we acturally go back in time to witness this story (present tense). Keep up the good work.

[MemorY]

BTW, incase I never mentioned it, I did enjoy korrupted illusions chapter 1. The way the story looks back at what was done is neat - you know how it ends but want to know how it happened... Just some issues with is this a flash back to the past (to use past tense) vs. did we acturally go back in time to witness this story (present tense). Keep up the good work.

Thats what my teacher said, she said "Nice use of flashback/time dimensions "....

[kryptonic]

WOW nice to see that I enspired all of you to write like this...Im about to start chapter 2....Ive been busy with school work.