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October 14th, 2003, 07:46 AM
#1
Poetry
"Torture"
These feelings inside . . . when I see your face
Are enough to drive a man insane
and I don't know why. . . I can’t seem to find
A single word to say to you in time
You walk over me. . . Like im some disease
And you know how much you hurt me down inside
But you don't really see. . . the tears that you bring
As you push the dagger deep inside my mind
These games that you play. . . have caused me to see
The true person that you are today
But I don't know why. . . these feelings won't subside
I still feel the same as I did the first day
"Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill
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October 14th, 2003, 12:16 PM
#2
http://www.antionline.com/showthread...&pagenumber=11
Its part of a poem I wrote a few days ago. I just blurted it out at random. There is more and it actually gets alot better but I just gotta remember it, thats all. The poem is called "drink my ****ing sperm."
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October 14th, 2003, 02:15 PM
#3
Junior Member
sometimes I think that
people get too deep about
poetry, y'know?
Never because of, Always in spite of.
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October 14th, 2003, 03:21 PM
#4
I actually wrote that when I was at work the other day. It sucks. . . . but. . . oh well.
Originally posted here by |The|Specialist
http://www.antionline.com/showthread...&pagenumber=11
Its part of a poem I wrote a few days ago. I just blurted it out at random. There is more and it actually gets alot better but I just gotta remember it, thats all. The poem is called "drink my ****ing sperm."
lmao. . . Thats pretty messed up man. But hey. . . . poetry tells a lot about a person.
"Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill
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October 14th, 2003, 04:05 PM
#5
If the two poles of the earth could be brought together with an indiscribable harmony
there would be a question as to wheather destiny had a habbit of creating strong currents
and unsailorable seas, madness is even as night and day one only knows what's right as
seen within from a spectrum of thought be it faded or judged.
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October 15th, 2003, 11:53 AM
#6
Mines called "Happy Happy Joy Joy, Jesus loves you"
Ra! screams he, the one armed man
who looks and
waits
patiently.
Your mother sucks cocks in hell yet
like a summers kiss,
a shameless ballet of sunshine
lets Jesus **** you.
Midnight, the zenith of my being
how art we to know
our destiny?
of clockworks and industry
of time and space
of cause and effect
we question; are we the true owners
of UNIX based operating systems?
Yes, Jesus loves you
happy happy joy joy
says a silent sculpture, whos lips
are of stone.
immobile, like the wind
yet - a stunning paradox
gentle as the zebra
well, believe it or not, that wasnt actually a poem. I just wrote the first word/phrase that came into my head and pressed 'enter' at odd moments. I bet if i was to put it to my english teacher they would manage to deconstruct it and write a 60,000 word thesis on the deep cultural significance of it and how it relates to society in the context of globalisation.
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October 15th, 2003, 02:42 PM
#7
sometimes I think that
people get too deep about
poetry, y'know?
It's not they are deep in to it alot of people can only express how they feel through words
in which i think is a good thing 
I had to google 'jfgi' to see what it meant. The irony is overwhelming.
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October 15th, 2003, 10:18 PM
#8
Originally posted here by cdkj
It's not they are deep in to it alot of people can only express how they feel through words
in which i think is a good thing
Exactly. I am totally different IRL. Im very withdrawn. Shy. No one can ever tell if something is wrong with me because I try to show no emotion. I hold everything back inside. Which is bad in a way. But online. . . I don't really don't care. I can express myself freely.
"Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill
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October 15th, 2003, 10:25 PM
#9
Guys, I think you missed it  Chumprocks post was haiku. 5 syllables, 7, then 5 more
Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.
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October 15th, 2003, 10:59 PM
#10
Didn't miss it. Why else would he post it in 3 line format. Instead of 1 line.
"Never give in-never, never, never, in nothing great or small, large or petty, never give in to convictions of honor and good sense. Never yield to force; never yield to the apparently overwhelming might of the enemy!" - Winston Churchill
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