Maestr0 is dead on with the points pointed out about your rough draft (Let's call it that). It is great that you do know all of this but when you don't state sources then your teacher will really never know if it is true or not. We are trying to write a professional paper here correct?? I was always taught to state sources when statistics are involved. Once they come out of your mouth, the statistics could have been skewed to your bias.

Other than keep working on it and I'm sure the AntiOnline Community will be glad to help you out and work out all the kinks.

Originally posted here by MemorY
The sources are ME. I know those things. I dont know where i read about them, it was along time ago, so i dont have sources. There will be a (Article Title, and last name of author)after every sentence i copied from somewhere else. There will be a works cited page at the end naming the sources. everything else are my words.

I'll get more to the point in the introduction. The paper is not odne yet, so i'll probaby post it tonight.