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  1. January 9th, 2004, 03:13 AM #11
    scriptkiddie18
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    not bad but im listing the problems in the 2nd paragraph

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    The consequence being that the person addicted to the cigarettes will live their life with something they do not really need, cigarettes.
    look cheyenne i like the sentence you made and i made it like that and im not going to put the sentence behind it...i think this part is good now
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  2. January 9th, 2004, 07:58 AM #12
    hypronix
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    I assume you haven't yet looked at my post given that some incredible grammar and punctuation errors are still to be found throughout. I suggest you at least give it a quick look [i am not saying I am any kind of authority but something you might find useful there]
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  3. January 9th, 2004, 05:41 PM #13
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    I did give it a look and i corrected them...today the rough draft is due in my 7th hour...its 5th hour now...all i have to do is interview someone and include it in my essay.
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